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Haikuwrimo July 2008

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1. Blue jay

feather flutters down
blue jay flying from willow
treasure in the grass

2. Blue jay also

feather in the grass
spied while feeding birds
blue jay thankyou

3. Forgotten haiku

so many haiku
millions of snow flakes falling
blizzard in my brain

4. Lettuce

lettuce fat with rain
down in the vegetable patch
sits and waits for more

5. Day-lilies

hanging out washing
lily perfume turns the head
yellow dazzles eyes

6. Surprise and joy!

two blue jay feathers
growing in the flower-pot
third lies right beside

7. Saucy

early morning
three things rise:
sun, bread, men

8. Wherever you go!

pleasant evening stroll
for the black-flies

9. On The Beach

three pyramids
blue crepe
yachts glide across the bay

10. Fly!

wind blows
potted blue jay feathers
strain to fly

11. Escape!

yesterday three feathers
today two
gone with the wind

12. Two for One.

two treasures found
more blue than the one lost

13. Cat.

black crescent moon
shines upon the grass

or:

crescent moon's shadow
slick upon the grass

14. Laburnum.

yellow blossom snow
drifts beside the garden

15. Peely fun.

paper skin peel
sunburn's generous gift

16. Blue jay saga part seven.

reward for planting impatiens
now there are six

17. Bliss.

a window
cool breeze
leaves rustle

18. Forgotten haiku 2.

words lost
scattered on the ground
laburnum blossoms

19.  Haiku burn-out.

eight days; no haiku;
no counting of syllables;
free to take a breath

20. Pink

impatiens and lilies
both of them pink
and the lady wore...?

21. Fur coats on a hot day.

cats melt in the sun
unbelievably they wear
fur coats in summer

22. Bay Roberts, Newfoundland.

mad rocks
whales in the bay
heaven on water

23. Laundry.

knickers on the line
smell sweeter than strawberries

24. Strawberries.

watering at night
intoxicating perfume
crushed beneath my feet

25. Outside.

coffee and cookies
ceiling of trees
walls of flowers

26. Satisfaction!

I don't need no
double negative

27. Jaundiced.

white space
got to be filled
utter crap will do

28. Milk.

sour taste
bitter thoughts
sweet independence

29. Haiku ennui

bored of haiku
peace overload
gone to sleep

30. Thunder and lightning.

shot-gun riding
on the clouds
blue powder flash

31. Pure Fantasy.

jade frog
chartreuse lily pad
green thoughts
1. Saw this from my kitchen window today.
Went and retrieved feather and stuck it in a flower-pot outside. Will a blue jay grow?
2. Well, it happened again: day 2 and another feather. If this goes on I may end up with 31 feathers by the end of the haikuwrimo and a bald blue jay in my garden.
3. because I completely forgot to come up with a haiku yesterday even though I read loads of other peoples - haiku overload.
4. We bought lots of lettuce plants thisyear and they are doing very well. Yummy!
5. Beautiful things.
18. Thought of a haiku for this day and it's completely gone from my head.
6. Well, after three days of no feathers I thought the blue jay feather thing was over, but as I was tending the garden yesterday lo and behold i see another feather on the ground right by the pot where I stuck the first two.
7. Getting down and dirty now!
8. Title comes from a very funny song that there is a great NFBC animation for: The Black Fly Song. We went for a walk yesterday evening and got bitten by loads of black flies, and there were mosquitos too!
9. Last evening down on the beach. Too beautiful for words - but I had a go anyway.
10. Sitting out having coffee en famille and the wind was blowing and the blue-jay feathers were stirring. Even my husband said that should be my next haiku. I'm going to take a picture of them and I can have it as a preview.
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xOBitter-RealityOx's avatar
I really love number 1, and 9 :)

Especially number 1. I miss Blue Jays, they're so purty! Police of the Forest :)

Anyway, yes. I really liked the others, but those two caught my eye! ;)

-Kourtz