literature

One line haiku.

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Literature Text

on the horizon  meeting and falling  the bay and the ocean
For haiku contest: [link]
Run by :iconthe-haiku-club:
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RedDragonfly's avatar
This was one of my favorites in the contest-
I love the imagery.

I just had trouble with the middle section-
"meeting and falling"

Myabe it's that you split two cliches-
"meeting and parting"/"rising and falling"-
but I just couldn't quite grab on to it.