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evening
rain and fog
the sky blushes
Had a wonderful experience riding home in the car the other evening. The weather was horrible, but as we neared home a pink/red glow appeared in the sky and grew and grew as we got closer. Some of the clouds parted and the colour intensified and spread.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This poem evokes such a feeling of peace and contentment... :)
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010   Writer
I am very happy that you got that feeling from it! :)
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Spriglief Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
NIce mood, it wants the reader to wonder what the sky is blushing over.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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wrzosowata-Iro Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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Itti Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked reading this story and the peaceful, poetiv haiku that went with it. Very nice.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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RetroZombie Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010
I like the image of a blushing sky! :aww:
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010   Writer
It was ashamed because of the rain but instantly forgiven!
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