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Spring HaikuA soft breeze sweeps through
Pale cherry blossom petals
Carrying my tears.
Broken Temple Cradled by forest
And gentle whispers of wind
Songbirds softly call
A solitary temple
A broken shrine so patient

A stone goddess waits
Flowers adorn her figure
A smile on her lips
Arms outstretched to weary souls
Butterflies rest on her hands

So long forgotten
By all but the falling leaves
That ever praise her
And her sacred resting place
Hidden by nature's children
PrisonerThe prisoners in
cages of sadness. What if
it was us instead?
One minute past twelveLuscious shoe-lace skies
Tied in a mint moonlit bow;
Open this next day.
TimeRiver flows frozen
Birds like to dance in the sky
Another year past
Nightthe moon is outside
water rushes from the sky
my universe cries
NightThe darkness of night
Made complete obscurity,
Then comes daylight.
Haiku - Springtime!
Hope is in the air

                    The wonders of creation

                                              Can you hear feel the warmth?
Lavender- HaikuLavender smoke drifts
Burning sweetly in my pipe
I am calm, at peace
The Sun KingLook at the Sun go down,
In the fire lit sky,
Burning. Melting; into night.
Watch the sun die slow, calmly,
The night takes over,
Arising in the daytime.
Breaking in the crack of dawn,
Taking its birthright,
Ruling the day forever.
Valentine's SeasonValentine’s season
Full of happiness and love,
Rain falls silently.
Seasonal HaikuA sparkling moon:
Shimmering in the water,
A glittering eye.

I feel the wind blow—
Blushing bright autumn colours
Turning of new leaves.

Frothy white waves soothe
Troubled minds. I scrunch my toes—
It’s too cold this year...
The Weird Colored Birds.The white and rusty
Brown colors adorning each
Bird mean it's springtime
momentsunny air
spiderweb shadows
soon summer

campfire smoke
cherryflower dance
gracefully now

through the air
like an uncommon melody
white petals flow
~Moon~Shining orb above

With beautiful designs

Upon the world you glow
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Sunset haiku

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evening
rain and fog
the sky blushes
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Had a wonderful experience riding home in the car the other evening. The weather was horrible, but as we neared home a pink/red glow appeared in the sky and grew and grew as we got closer. Some of the clouds parted and the colour intensified and spread.
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~valkvick Oct 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This poem evokes such a feeling of peace and contentment... :)
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*somnomollior Oct 30, 2010   Writer
I am very happy that you got that feeling from it! :)
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~Spriglief Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
NIce mood, it wants the reader to wonder what the sky is blushing over.
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*somnomollior Oct 27, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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~wrzosowata-Iro Oct 24, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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*somnomollior Oct 24, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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`Itti Oct 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I liked reading this story and the peaceful, poetiv haiku that went with it. Very nice.
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*somnomollior Oct 24, 2010   Writer
Thank you!
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`RetroZombie Oct 22, 2010
I like the image of a blushing sky! :aww:
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*somnomollior Oct 24, 2010   Writer
It was ashamed because of the rain but instantly forgiven!
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