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presses onwards

I
am flattened
:iconsomnomollior:
My go at the tractus form introduced to me by :iconmrnakes:
Brevity is all.
How I have been feeling lately.
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Apr 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm going to work on Christopher's after NaPoWriMo.
I have a game plan of mostly highlighting 'character quality' words; Patience, Kindness, Giving, Noble and the like.
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:iconsomnomollior:
Sounds interesting.
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:iconlucidflux:
~lucidflux Apr 7, 2010  Student General Artist
I love the link between "press" and "flatten"--it really adds a kind of introspective length to the piece. c:
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:iconsomnomollior:
I am happy that you spotted that! That was the crux of the piece.
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:iconlucidflux:
~lucidflux Apr 8, 2010  Student General Artist
:'D
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:iconchrysanthe-al:
this is just WONDERFUL. in its simplicity.
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:iconsomnomollior:
Thank you! It's a form that concentrates the mind.
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:iconrlkirkland:
*rlkirkland Apr 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:D:D
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:iconsomnomollior:
Are you going to try it?
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*rlkirkland Apr 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry I put this comment in the wrong place at first. :confused:

I'm going to work on Christopher's after NaPoWriMo. :heart:I have a game plan of mostly highlighting 'character quality' words; Patience, Kindness, Giving, Noble and the like.
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